DJ-DaVinster's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anti-Generator]

Needs a little...

Well, it needs work (diversity and volume controlling), but it's still a good piece. Not that badd, but at the beginning where you go psycho on the hihats... Just, no. Use a D&B type of thing (not a sample, please). As I said before, it's still pretty good.

Be sure to check my audio page!
-DJ DaVinster

EternalDissonance responds:

hehe oops. that was really a glitch with fl studio... the tempo kept overdoin it there. damn demo version

[Óä--Acid Reflex--Óä]

Wow...

This is amazing for your third submission. I absolutely sucked when I was making my first 10 or 20.

*+*TIP*+*
Listen PAST the melody. Listen to what instruments people are using and practice a lot and you'll do a lot better than me or Xx-ChiRoN-xX.

PS: Xx-ChiRoN-xX gave me that tip.

Check my audio, too!
-DJ DaVinster

EternalDissonance responds:

awww, didnt u hear my countermelody? The first counter, not the second asain sounding one. oh well, u just gave me the best damn advice i heard in a long time, thanks. like i said, this was more experimental. I'm all about complicated melodies, u'll hear that a lot from me, but i know how to harmonize, so ill try on my next song.

[-API- Emerald Hill RMX (Sonic)]

Nice!

Why would we download it before listening? We listen to know how the song will be like!

Great song, btw.

[[MxG-7]-Electronic Haze]

To be honest,

It's okay. The first synth was offbeat a little. I'm still listening to it, the next synth just came in... Everything but the second synth off... hihat or snare fades in, new synth & beat. Third synth comes in with a new melody, along with hihats & claps. Another synth comes in. A darker synth comes in. Snares fade in. Still staying at the other melody? Last synth finishes it off, end.

I'd say, pretty good for an amateur (I'm an amateur, too, so don't be offended :) )

MxG-7 responds:

thanks! ill be sure to check your stuff out too

[DJ Sash - Drastic Influence(d)]

Grat song, but...

The only thing I heard was the bass was offkey (I dunno why). That's why I gave you a 9 on diversity.

Rave4Yourself responds:

lol, old track >XD

[JINGLE B3LLS]

Notes are off

Some of the notes are off in some places, but I guess that was supposed to happen. Great song either way!

GrumpyTheDorf responds:

I meant for the notes to be off on purpose, but thanks.

[{dj-N} Listen to Your Heart]

Pretty nice!

All I would change is, take out that "goodbye" or make it non-voxed or make it go up higher, 'cause it just scares me... Also, make the piano up an octave or two. The snares aren't too bad either. I like it.

Overall, I'd give it a 4/5 & 9/10

dj-Nate responds:

Lol, you got it.

[Hardcore Bass]

Great work!

-Originality- Never heard one like this before!
-Diversity- Very nice!
-Clarity- Pretty clear.
-Effort- A lot!
-+-OVERALL-+-A great piece! What bass did you use? I want to use it for a house remix of something... =/

Thanks for your time!
-DJ DaVinster

Rave4Yourself responds:

lol, HOUSE????

what bass? um, i dont quite remember EXACTLY, but i think I used the default "Bass_efmc" thing from FL Studio's "Basses" thing. and then i just pitched it down COMPLETELY i believe, and threw some MASSIVE distortion on it, and i combined that with some distorted kick.

i dunno, you can remix if you want, just email me or something.

[e-mail]

[Happy Trance]

Not too bad; not that good either...

-Originality- Pretty good.
-Diversity- Changes only like 4 times.
-Clarity- Not that great...
-Effort- Doesn't sound like you put a lot in this.
-+-OVERALL-+- Here's a tip: This isn't to make you discouraged. It's just to help you out. Don't make songs for a while. Listen to a few past the melody, like, listen to how clear the song is, what instruments they used, & what effects they used to make the song sound a lot better, and then you'll hit a point where you can be really good, just like Xx-ChiRoN-xX & me. If you need Vanguard or any more tips, PM me & I'll send you a text file full of tips & I'll throw in Vanguard for free!

EARNINGS:
3/5
5/10

Thanks for your time,
-DJ DaVinster

[ChiRoN- SuNNyViLLe]

Pretty Nice

I would've named it "Peacefulness in the Night Sky"
-Originality- W00t
-Clarity- Very clear!
-Diversity- Very nice!
-Effort- YOu put a lot in this, is seems!
-+-OVERALL-+- Make a longer song!

Thanks for your time!
-DJ DaVinster

BMC-Audio responds:

hehe, this one is really old. my second song, i think? the good old days...